Alex, it's good to see you considering your editing process and testing your ideas consistently with your target market group. Consider why you have decided on certain features in more detail. Why the blue instead of the red? Why the graffiti and how does this link with British hip hop? Is there anything in your research that has directed you towards these decisions? Don't base your decisions entirely on the target audience feedback; you must consider your research, and conventions you have identified, more carefully alongside your feedback. You state that you have changed one of the strap lines because it didn't make sense - which one? Why didn't it make sense? Be more detailed. On the strap line feedback, you have posted the feedback over the writing so it is difficult to read what you have written.
Alex, it's good to see you considering your editing process and testing your ideas consistently with your target market group.
ReplyDeleteConsider why you have decided on certain features in more detail. Why the blue instead of the red? Why the graffiti and how does this link with British hip hop? Is there anything in your research that has directed you towards these decisions?
Don't base your decisions entirely on the target audience feedback; you must consider your research, and conventions you have identified, more carefully alongside your feedback.
You state that you have changed one of the strap lines because it didn't make sense - which one? Why didn't it make sense? Be more detailed.
On the strap line feedback, you have posted the feedback over the writing so it is difficult to read what you have written.