Alex, this is much improved from your first attempt. I think the background and the colour scheme looks much more appealing and more prominent than the heavy black that was used on our first draft. EBI - The main anchorage needs to be more centralised. Don't drag it over the entire page - "He certainly thinks so" could be on a separate line underneath. Get rid of the capital letter on "Thinks." Ensure the blue in the strap lines is carefully placed so it doesn't blend too much with the background. I would also centralise the other strap lines.
Alex, this is much improved from your first attempt. I think the background and the colour scheme looks much more appealing and more prominent than the heavy black that was used on our first draft.
ReplyDeleteEBI - The main anchorage needs to be more centralised. Don't drag it over the entire page - "He certainly thinks so" could be on a separate line underneath. Get rid of the capital letter on "Thinks."
Ensure the blue in the strap lines is carefully placed so it doesn't blend too much with the background.
I would also centralise the other strap lines.