Thursday, 30 March 2017

Contents Page 2nd Draft - Main Task

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  1. WWW:
    - Excellent use of editing alongside text
    - Consistent house style, colours and fonts
    - Understanding of your music genre and target market interests

    EBI:
    - Could you perhaps fade out the building in the far background? This will bring the immediate focus to the forefront
    - Could you make the caption text underneath each cover line slightly larger in size?
    - Think about how you can illuminate or highlight the cover line that links to your main artist and DPS so that it is more visible to the reader?
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