WWW: - Consistent colour scheme - Overlapping image and text - Text size is varied according to importance
EBI: - Consider enlarging your main image so that the title of the magazine overlaps? This needs to be more prominent - Experiment with the use of shadow behind the magazine title to make it look embossed - Edit the image so that it stands out from the background; at the moment it is difficult to establish the outline of the image and the background colour as separate entities
Alex, I'm not sure the black clothing and the black background work. You need to be able to distinguish the artist clearly and at the moment, he seems to blend in. Are you sure that existing magazines use black backgrounds? You need to revisit your research to check if this is a common convention. Check your strap lines make sense: Drake's recent tour hits Britain too good doesn't make sense. Don't capitalise every word in your strap line. Your strap lines need to run down the sides of the cover not go across. You need to add more detail to your anchorage - is this an interview? Maybe include a quote to give your reader a sense of what is inside.
WWW:
ReplyDelete- Consistent colour scheme
- Overlapping image and text
- Text size is varied according to importance
EBI:
- Consider enlarging your main image so that the title of the magazine overlaps? This needs to be more prominent
- Experiment with the use of shadow behind the magazine title to make it look embossed
- Edit the image so that it stands out from the background; at the moment it is difficult to establish the outline of the image and the background colour as separate entities
Alex, I'm not sure the black clothing and the black background work. You need to be able to distinguish the artist clearly and at the moment, he seems to blend in. Are you sure that existing magazines use black backgrounds? You need to revisit your research to check if this is a common convention.
ReplyDeleteCheck your strap lines make sense: Drake's recent tour hits Britain too good doesn't make sense.
Don't capitalise every word in your strap line.
Your strap lines need to run down the sides of the cover not go across.
You need to add more detail to your anchorage - is this an interview? Maybe include a quote to give your reader a sense of what is inside.