Alex, you show some understanding of layout and conventions and use colour to good effect. Your masthead needs to be bigger and more prominent. The strap lines need more consideration. There needs to be more of them. At the moment it looks like there is only 3 articles inside and you need to give the impression there is plenty to look at. Don't include the caption 'outside of Craythorne building' you don't need captions on the front cover. Keep an eye in the colour used for your strap lines; the yellow is very difficult to read against the background. Try and include more detail - what tips for Year 7? Results is spelt wrong. For the strap line about the interview with the Year 13 student, you may benefit form including an image of the student being interviewed.
Alex, you show some understanding of layout and conventions and use colour to good effect.
ReplyDeleteYour masthead needs to be bigger and more prominent.
The strap lines need more consideration. There needs to be more of them. At the moment it looks like there is only 3 articles inside and you need to give the impression there is plenty to look at.
Don't include the caption 'outside of Craythorne building' you don't need captions on the front cover.
Keep an eye in the colour used for your strap lines; the yellow is very difficult to read against the background.
Try and include more detail - what tips for Year 7?
Results is spelt wrong.
For the strap line about the interview with the Year 13 student, you may benefit form including an image of the student being interviewed.